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Update send.md - #236

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Changes based on the recommendations made by @danielnordh here: #181 (comment)

Changes based on the recommendations made by @danielnordh here: BitcoinDesign#181 (comment)
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{% include image.html
image = "/assets/images/guide/payments/send/first-confirmation.svg"
alt-text = "Notifications after the transaction is broadcasted"
alt-text = "Notifications after the transaction is broadcast"

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not sure about this. is it grammatically correct?

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Both appear to be acceptable. See here. I personally prefer "broadcast", for whatever reason it sounds better, but YMMV.

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Closes #209

Co-authored-by: Christoph Ono <chri@sto.ph>

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Still not completely used to broadcast over broadcasted in some places, but if english works like this then I won't fight it.

Thanks for taking this on @paulosacramento!

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